OUGD402 | Studio Brief 02 - Interim Crit

As I have become quite stuck with my designs for self-branding, I organised a critique to help me know where to go next. I had felt the need to completely revamp the designs I had come up with. However, the group disagreed and felt that my current designs were successful, in particular my hand written type logo was a favourite.
The group agreed with me that the paper cut designs were too floral and suggested that I either papercut a single flower or investigate the possibility of embossing.
During the crit I came up with the idea of using a brown card stock for my business cards, similar to the design below. The group agreed this would be ideal.

The group was drawn to one of my original typographic sketches. It was suggested that I look at the work of Rob Ryan as the type I created was similar to his designs. 

Work By Rob Ryan

Finally, I stated that I liked the title I had used on my design board. They suggested that I could use this as a title on my website. They further suggested that I use the server weebly to create this.